**I received a review copy from the author in exchange for an honest review**
I first heard of this author through her posts on Amazon's MOA forum. I was intrigued when she said she writes for intelligent women. What did that mean exactly? When this book became free around Christmas I clicked on it and decided to give it a try. I have to admit I was lost for the first 4% of the book. The writing style takes some getting used to. There are no dialogue tags in this book. By that I mean if two characters are talking there is no Mark asked and Danny replied. The conversation is in quotation marks and you just have to know who is speaking. In the beginning of the series before you really get to know the characters it is difficult to know who is speaking. I tried to read only when I had time to finish an entire chapter. If I had to stop reading in the middle of a chapter I would have to click back a few pages when I picked up the book again.
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** Originally reviewed for Penwick Chronicles **
** Originally reviewed for Penwick Chronicles **
**Originally reviewed for Penwick Chronicles**
This book was a very fast read for me. I enjoyed the authors depictions of angels and demons. I had a problem with the setting for some reason I didn't feel the characters were grounded in the setting of the Holy land. Maybe I'm being unfair because I have lived in Jerusalem, Israel but I don't feel the author accurately described the land. I also found it puzzling that the author chose Masada as the final battle instead of the tradition Megiddo. I don't think the plateau of Masada is bigger enough to hold the armies described as watching the battle. But again I'm rather picky about the scenery since I actually lived near it. Overall the book was a good read I recommend it.
The book was very enjoyable until the ending. The ending was very abrupt and left lots of loose ends. I'm not sure if this was meant to set up a sequel or not. I liked the premise but I think the world could have been developed a bit more. We only hear about one city Haven. We don't know if all the cities in the world are now set up like this. I think more information about other cities in the world would have made this a more interesting book. I did not notice as many formatting errors as mentioned in earlier reviews so I believe most of those issues are now fixed.